Urgent! Extra Credit Blog!

I looked back on the blog post, where I critiqued others, and thought of how I could incorporate those thoughts into to my own writing. I mentioned  that people didn't have a transitional statement, therefore the paper was somewhat bunched up. So, while doing the final draft I made an effort to really highlight the transitional statement. I think when people wrote them before, they wanted to make the paper flow, so the transitional statement had to flow, making it altogether hidden. I also talked about word choice, so I think that while I'm editing, the paper tonight, I will be making note of those words that are repeated, and to be frank plain boring, so I can liven them up. Lastly, I discussed my own improvements, which were to find my own writing style. To feel comfortable while handing in that paper, knowing that I laid fourth my best. I don't think I can really do this tonight but, its worth a try!