Dear Kayla and Catherine,
First I'd like to ask how your weekend has been? I hope your enjoying and spending your time wisely. To start off with, there isn't anything new with my paragraph since I haven't touched it since Friday. I plan on fine tuning everything for Monday and also added the conclusion and the transition between paragrph which I think I will need lots of help! I have an idea of what my transtion between paragragh should be, still a little sketchy though. Good Luck, and I'll see you on Monday!!! From reading Catherine's I need to know if anyone has an aphorism, since I have an epigram? Any ideas on how to wrap up the paragraph? Kayla I need you to email/facebook your pragraph to me! Thanks:)
I think we all need to talk about, and work on transitions, but that is the main thing. i dont think that anyone has any aphorisms though... i would need to read your paragraph again to help you with the transitions and endings... see you on monday!
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